Watch me move in time with the music
Watch me love you with all my heart
Take me, right here, right now
Take my hand; i will show you the way
Love me now, forever more
Love me with all your heart
Just say yes, with all your heart
Just say yes, and never let this end
Tumble with me, right here, right now
Tumble with me and give me your body
Feel the sharp objects trace lines down your skin
Feel my tongue run over those lines
Taste your sweat, glistening on your skin
Taste your blood, hot and sweet
Feel me move alongside you
Feel me love you, forever and always
Watch me live this life to the fullest, right here, right now
Watch me...
Taste me...
Touch me...
Love me...
Feel me...
Take me...
Caress me...
Love me...
This is what it is to burn
Author notes
hehe... random stuff that i wrote while inspired by my latest crush!!!! yay...
Written November 19th, 2005
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the only thing i dont like is the title, reminds me of a song. but very good
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hehe... maybe i should show this to my crush just to see what he does... though it might scare him off a bit... it might be worth it though..... anyways... thanks for the compliments!
-alex -
this is very passionate
alluring and enchanting
i'm trying to think of words but nothing's happening
i hope you go get him, coz he's in for a shock
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Awesome poem, you did an excellent job with the last line. It was amazing to me. I really liked the style especially! And thanks for the awesome awesome comment!
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Very awesome.. This is really good... i liek the way you wrote it... very good.. keep it up... great write
Stephani -
umm... which version did you read? cuz i just edited this...
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Great
Very Good!!! I Liked it!!!
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