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Bleed Out Loud

We're all shut up in our corners
in to this light,we won't cross borders
So I'll take it in my hands to be heard
my pain will be heard,every single word

My only chance to bleed out loud
while the pain of ignorance will enshroud
every last word i say,every last drop
this which i can't put up with will stop
While i make myself heard by all of you
my one and only chance at this debut

If you won't listen I'll die in mute
just to be put down with my one pursuit
to be heard and to be noticed by you
and that time i was noticed i flew

Never again will i fall for this
for all i ever do is shoot and miss
so i thank you for not listening
and making me down in the time i was glistening

Author notes

when you read this i want you to think of all the things that your keeping inside and just let them out to anyone who is willing to listen,that's all i ask
Written November 18th, 2005

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  • Sweetz
    November 19, 2005
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    Your opening line is so true, I embrace my corner, its the only place I know will always be there for me. I really like your write. Something about it pulls me in.And as much as I would like to let it all out to someone anyone, which "one" do u trust enough to just let go???
    Edited on Nov 19 because ''.