Look in the mirror
tell me what you see
I see a little girl
trying to be something she's not
I look at her once
I looke at her twice
What did i see?
The love of my life
I wish she was here
I wish i was there
I hope that some day
I'll be with her
She says she loves me
and i say it back
I say that i mean it
and she says im wack
Dont laugh at this poem
You feel my sorrow
I hope that someday you'll be with me
when the day comes
ill be away,but if you want
you can find me somewhere
speak with the devil
and he'll bring you to hell.....> : )
Author notes
UHm i dongt know what i wrote but it was fun...plz comment back..
Written November 18th, 2005
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i really like this. it is an amazing theme.
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Hey this is really good,brilliant imaginary a lovely love poem,good luck in your relationship,I can see she adores you.Well done poet
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really sweet
Wow Oscar, I have never read any of poetry, and Sara told me it was good. I definately agree with her. Amazing work!!! You and Sara are such a cute couple. Best of luck to the two of you. Great work!!! -
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hey oscar,this is really kool,best wishes to u & sara -
thanx for the comment
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nice work! Keep it up!
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nice honey i really like it!!!
i like the part about the little girl
trying to be something she's not!
reminds me of a little girl i know!
but anyway at least you don't know what i'm
something i'm not!
if you can uderstand what i just said honey!!
LOVE YOU ALWAYS WITH KISSES AND HUGS
~~Sara~~
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I like it! I loved this part: speak with the devil
and he'll bring you to hell.....> : ) and I definitely didn't laugh! Though I am smiling now. Good work!
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