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Start the Change

Do you want to....
                   See a chance?
                      Start a revolution?
                         Make a difference?

Do you want to.....
                    Change the world?
                       Change people’s lives?
                          Start a movement?

                    Do you want to?
       What are you going to do about it?
           Where are you going to start?

Want to start a change?
      Change yourself
Make the choice....
      Only you can change yourself

Impact yourself.... to impact the world.

Author notes

I wrote this a week ago, but I wasn't sure if I should post it. I showed it to my friend (NeedsLNow) today before school and he told me I should post it. So here it is. It's a bit different than my other poems because it's not all nicely lined up to the left. I tried something different. Let me know what you think about it.

You Have My Heart by GoldenEssence
"BABY BLUE"
Written November 18th, 2005

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  • phantom girl
    December 7, 2006

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    wonderful

    Tim- i don't know how many times i have said this before, but I will say it again. you have a wonderful way of writing things, whether they are things that are just on your mind or things that impact the people around you. yeah, this is not the type of poetry that you have posted often, but there is a lot in it that speaks out to the people around us. Visiting the other day back here at allpoetry and commenting on other people's poems reminds me of how much help this was to me, not to mention how some people in particular helped me through some of the hard times in my life. (Thanks to you, cuz you are one of them ) Anyway, a great write for trying something new!

  • FindingFate
    November 26, 2006

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    Yes...it reminds me of the quote by Ghandi..."You must be the change you wish to see in the world." Very well voiced...Trina


  • Hidded Within
    November 23, 2005
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    Short, And to the point, great job. and true, you have to change yourself to change the world, very true. great job! thanks for entering, and good luck.
    Peace to ya

    ~Beth


  • outofbreath
    November 23, 2005
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    not enough for me. I liked the idea though, especially the last line. Good luck in the contest.
    --Catie


  • GoldenEssence
    November 23, 2005
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    I think this is wonderful! Great write!

    Gracie

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