A Hunny, Funny, Sunny Day
To Joyce, my friend, my sister halve,
this kyrielle I send your way,
I wish that you may always have
a hunny, funny, sunny day.
It means a lot to be your friend,
I hope that you will always stay,
when you are here, we can all spend
a hunny, funny, sunny day.
Your smile, it brightens up the room
as you depict a bright sun ray,
a rose that opens to full bloom
a hunny, funny, sunny day.
© Jim T. Henriksen
September 17th, 2005
Author notes
I wrote this tribute to my AP-sister sunny day , also known as Joyce, for the contest "Joyce And Liadan" by Bride Of Hate. It won the GOLD trophy! 
Written November 17th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Joyce And Liadan by Bride Of Hate.
500 points, ended November 19, 2005, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hi, Sigrun! I am glad you liked this little tribute to my friend. Thanks for your comment, it was grrrrrreat! (Ops, that was wrong tiger.
) 
Jim
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very cute
Hi Jim, this poem was so cute and tiggerific!
I love it love it love it and now I'm off to read more of your poetry.....
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Hi, Shahrzad! No, unfortunately this poem is not to you.
Thanks for the comment! Jim
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wow...a lovely poem.Is it for me?
Shahrzad -
Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem, Star Of The Night. I am glad you liked it! Merry Christmas to you aswell!
Starhiker
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Great poem Starhiker, I like it a lot, very good, and cute picture too, keep up the good work
best wishes as always
Merry Christmas
Star Of The Night
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Thank you for the comment, RazorbladeXCrush. I really appreciate you dropping by and reading my stuff. Jim
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(Thanks for the comment, yes, this is true, but not for me, but someone I love dear..) Wonderful poem! Makes me all happy, I loved that show when I was younger and still do a lot!! Lol. Awesome work!
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No worry, anyone can make a mistake.
Thanks for the congrats! Jim
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LOL I'm sorry Jim I should've known that, but I guess it slipped me because it's usually used as a verb
Nehoo, congrats on taking home the gold! Well done!
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Thanks, sis! This gold trophy sure shines bright. I look forward to seeing this poem on your page. Thanks for the wonderful comment. A big hug to you and your husband!
Jim
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Hi, Pamela! I am so thrilled you liked this tribute to Joyce! Thanks for the comment, and the applause! Jim
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Hi, Stacy! Thanks for the comment, and the applause. Halve is a word, just look at dictionary.reference.com/search?q=halve ... Jim
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Hi, sis! Thanks for the wonderful comment, and the heartwarming applause! Jim
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Kudos!!!
Jim, Just came back to say congratulations to my little bro for taking home yet another gold trophy. You are outstanding and it not only is in your work but yourself as a person. Bless you for such a beautiful piece and I'll have to add this to my home page for all that visit to see. Love and blessings for you, Monica and Ole, today and always. Joyce
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Excellent
A WONDERFUL Kyrielle, Perfect form, Pefect flow and an anchor line that says it all.
Well done. - our Sunny Day will be MUCH sunnier now. What a pleasure to read this dedication to one of the kindest people I know. BRAVO! ~Pam -
Wonderful!
I love hunny, funny sunniness Great job Jim, and a wonderful tribute to one that is very deserving I'm sure. Beautiful Kyrielle, I've yet to write one, but the time is fast appoaching as its one of the assignments for my AP class The rhyming and meter was on key (except for the very first line: halve) 
that I would consider a bit forced since it's not really a word, but you used it seemingly to get a rhyme for have.
Nehoo, just thought I'd point it out, I would feel as though I'm doing you an injustice if I hadnt. Other than that it was a fantastic piece, and deserves a clap hand LOL
Best wishes always,
Stacy
ps: I adore POOH!
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Jim another well written and cute write.. I knew she would be thrilled.. you always make special efforts in your poems.. great job.. Love sis..Linda
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Hi, David! I am so glad you liked this little hunny, funny, sunny poem I wrote. Thanks for the comment, and the applause! Jim
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A.-O.K. 10-Q, sir
This ordered verse, conveying as it does its warm, encouraging, and friendly message, did help greatly change my foul mood this early pre-sunrise dawn. I am sick, my son is sick, so this was just the ticket. -
Hi, Anna! Thanks for your wonderful comment, and the heartwarming applause! Jim
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What a great tribute Jim, for a lovely lady like 'sunny day' aka Joyce. You did a great job. Very well done. Anna.
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Hi, Huntress! Thanks for the wonderful comment on this poem! Jim
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This is very kind of you to do. I can see she loved it You are a great friend
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Hi, Kitty! Thanks for your wonderful comment, and the heartwarming applause! Jim
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Awwww this is so beautiful!! Well done well done well done!!! This is outstanding work Jim and dedicated to such a hunny, funny sunny lady too! Thank you for sharing the gorgeous piece with us!!
ne love,
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Hi, sis! I am so thrilled that you liked this little piece I wrote. We are poetic twin siblings, seperated at conception. I know we will be friends forever, even should AllPoetry one day close forever. Thanks for the great comment, the good luck wish for the contest, and the standing ovation with applause. You know it means a lot to me, coming from the sister I never had. You are more of a sister to me, than my real life half-sister. Hugs to you and your husband. Jim
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THANK YOU!!!
Jim,
Tears of joy as I am so touched by this. You are the best brother I could ever have as I don't have any in my blood family. It means a lot to me Jim, I also hope that we will forever remain friends. Otherwise it just wouldn't be "a hunny, funny, sunny day." If there ever comes a day that I leave this site and I don't think that will happen anytime soon. I hope never, I will not lose touch with you and the new family I have found. Thank you so much for this Jim, it touches my heart so deeply. Best wishes in the contest bro. If I have to get second, I'll gladly take it if your first. Love and blessings for you and the family, today and always my dear sweet bro!!!!! Joyce
P.S. You know you get a standing ovation along with the applause for this.
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