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How Bad Can It Be Out There?

I close my eyes as tight as I could
And pray I will leave this town
I feel Im so misunderstood
If I stay I will certainly drown
I pack my bags and run out the door
I swear I will never return
I run up to the road and wait for the rain to pour
A better life is what I yearn
Im tired of always being
The one who is alone
I always seem to be fleeing
From places I should be calling my home
My bags are packed and Im reading to run
Im just waiting for this day to be done

Author notes

For Strevers class. It was a picture of a girl on the side of the road with a suitcase and I had to write a poem about the story of it. Yea, it makes no sense.. but this is it.
Written November 17th, 2005

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  • Mythoughtsunleashed
    November 17, 2005
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    its good though. i like it. and it does make sense.