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Archer of the Heart.

Stand back a distance and take aim.
Steady that arm,and focus in.

            Ready?
             
            Aim

            FIRE!!
Straight through my heart.
Piercing right through the skin like nothing.

I look down only to see the arrow that stands out.
Both hands on my chest.
I looking back at you, I fall to my knees.


          Nice shot.

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Hope ya enjoy.
Written November 17th, 2005

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  • Let The Fire Play
    September 21, 2006
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    Nice bro, it has a sense of sick irony to it and despite being shot it seems as tho you get the last laugh so to speak...anyway good job

  • xSarahx
    July 31, 2006
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    This was really awesome. I remember the first time you asked me to read this for you. I was like WOW! YAY!!! BRITNY WROTE ANOTHERRRR!!! <3

    -Sar
  • A Cause For Concern
    November 17, 2005
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    Thank you very much.
    I hoped that it would be a new piece from all the other poems.
    Happy that you enjoyed it.
    have a good day.
  • retard
    November 17, 2005
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    i liked this poem so much.
    because it's different from others and that's what i'm looking for reading poetry.
    keep it up.