The silvery moon and streaks of light
eyes sparkling with sheer delight
visions dancing with moonbeams high
trailing our love throughout the sky
Luminous Arcturus speaks out to me
lambent star brings hope silently
meandering heaven like a falling star
shortens the distance from afar
The galaxy nova ejecting it's gases
creating beauty as the twilight passes
spellbound with thoughts of our love
wishing on stars in heaven above
Captivated by the Almighty's creations
my thoughts interrupted by hesitations
dreaming of castles beyond the moon
only to be dashed by the sunrise soon
For night time is my time to drift away
from reality's tears that fall each day
the moon cast a shadow upon my face
so captivating is this special place
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Written November 17th, 2005
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
AH Thank you so much Marissa. I so appreciate it. Take care, Saandy
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Aww. this is such a beautiful poem.
Fantastic imagery in it as well.
I loved it.
awesome job mom.
keep it up.
~Midnite rae
[the morbid mistress]
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So glad you liked it.
Always love your comments. God Bless youy, Sandy 
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wow this was a moving write. i loved it.. great imagery.. thank you for sharing your words with me. -
You got so much meaning in such a short poem, well done friend. Michael.
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Excellent
this was an excellent poem
i totally loved this one sandy...
beautiful imagery and awesome Opening stanza
"The silvery moon and streaks of light
eyes sparkling with sheer delight
visions dancing with moonbeams high
trailing our love throughout the sky"
excellent rhyme and flow
keep on writing
Nooni -
its beautiful. The imagery and the emotion in it is astounding..great job..
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Love the aabb scheme. The only thing I see is that me doesnt rhyme with sighlently but it can pass! Its beautiful!
Grace -
this is gorgeous...i like it a lot! i love the imagery and the deep meaning behind it all, it's great!!! your writing style is great. xo kitten
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Your rhyming is very nice, the picture is cute, and the words speak out at you. I like the poem a lot. You have done a magnificant job with this one.
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Its darling. There is a natural and uforced flow to it, one which made me enjoy reading your piece. its a vivd brew of words.
Lots of Philia, Dthoures
Edited on Nov 17, 5:50 p.m. because 'Wrong spelling
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beautiful
a very nice piece... such vivid description... i enjoyed reading this ... everything flowed so naturally...great work... keep penning new poems best wishes smiling shadow
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beautiful poem, very well done, I love it. Wonderfully written.
Tanita -
beautiful poem grandma, I really liked this, well done with it, I am sure everyone will like it, keep up the fantastic work
best wishes as always
grandson
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