The light penetrates the darkness
love warms his soul
healing the bleading wounds
The light penetrates the darkness
coldness steals her hope
opening old and new wounds
Author notes
this is about a old friend...but he is not on AP so i have to show him in person wish me luck...
Written November 17th, 2005
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OMG!! This is so true to life! This poem is written very well. Its happy and sad at the same time. It says so much with out having to came right out and saying it. I honestly love this poem. I'm still going through the same thing. Poeple can be so nice then so hurtful. Keep your head up and keep writting. This is one of the best poems I've seen. GREAT WORK!
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this is really good
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