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Bathe Me In Beauty

Bathe me in beauty
Not in jewels and gold
But with a poetic song and a single rose...
Shower me with gifts
Not with monetary abundance
But the freedom to be me
And the forgiveness of foolish mistakes...
Cherish the moment
Not on a whim
But with the true expression of self...
Live the dream
Not within a single night
But through  vision,
Wonder ,
And the extraordinary gift of knowledge,
That will endure a lifetime...

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Written November 17th, 2005

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  • AlanaDevon
    December 27, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words...and for giving us all the opportunity of reading your wonderful poetry...

  • Shepherdess
    December 27, 2005
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    I love the simple wat you have put across acomplex concept
    well done keep up the good work