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Let The Games Cease

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You're just not happy
Unless I'm crying
You're just not satisfied
Unless I'm drowning

It was so long ago
Why bother me again?
What have I ever done to you?
Why can't you just let it all end?

I don't want you in my life
I don't need you around me
You only cause pain
You only induce misery

In one fell swoop
You crushed my heart
Not stopping til it shattered
And was torn completely apart

All I ever did was love you
In return I got pain
The things you did
Nearly drove me insane

It's over
Has been for awhile now
Don't start it again
It's not something I will allow

Go away
I beg you, please
Walk away
Let the games cease

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Written November 16th, 2005

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  • WolfHeart gold member
    June 18, 2006
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    excellent

    Oh, this speaks to me in a thundering voice. My abuser, who I still love, would be away long enough for me to start getting my life back together, and we would be off again. He was my husband and I always thought it would work out! This is excellent work in every way.

  • Desire gold member
    November 16, 2005
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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw thanks sweetie....
    Love to death toooooooooooooooo ....
    runs to the acrostic collection
    Edited on Nov 16, 5:27 p.m. because 'ooooooooops'.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    November 16, 2005
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    You are the best!
    I love you to death hun.
    And BTW you may wanna take alook in my Arcostic collection there's a lil gift for ya there


  • Desire gold member
    November 16, 2005
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    Holy shitake mushrooms...I did not click the feature...
    Thought to visit the page itself...

    stares at the monitor....
    I wish you the best my friend and may this person...
    Whoever this person is....here is a message I'll pass on:
    LEAVE MY FRIEND ALONE...
    throws a water balloon and runs

    Keep on writing my dear!!!!!!
    Thank you for sharing this piece~~~~~~
    and much love~Desire
  • Darker Lyn
    November 16, 2005
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    ok

    i like it, i've been there, i bet a lot of poeple have.
  • Philogos gold member
    November 16, 2005
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    Interesting but a touch personal, I think. As it is, it is good generic stuff with some strong emotions showing, but without a context, one's response ends up being limited. Nice poem, but I think you need to include a bit more of the background to alow it to stand better alone. vic
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