Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Suffering

The violent pain which contracts my soul
Finds no soothing in the blackened days
Groping for sleep, I only find listless slumber
A waning veil has befallen me
En-wraps me in a frightening hold
What thrashing of the heart and mind
Has been bestowed upon me

Author notes


Written November 16th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)