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Morning Has Broken

Silver shafts of sunlight,
filter through the trees.
Glory of the new day,
warms the golden leaves.

Dew drops softly fading,
fall from leaf of lifting brush.
Warmed by sunlit kisses,
from natures sweetest touch.

In the clearing of the forest,
spotlight bright center stage.
As the many hues of floral,
explode in summer color's rage.

Winged birds and butterflies awake,
greeting morning's golden quake.

      ~~~Suseann~~~
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Written November 15th, 2005

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  • wishintreeUK
    September 11, 2006
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    I just clicked on return the favour and it bought me here, I remembered this poem suseann, you won 100 points for fourth place, the contest was a very close one and I found the judging difficult

    Well Done!

    ~Katie~


  • Autumn Whisper
    May 21, 2006
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    Lovely suseann, it had wonderful flow, the rhyming worked good, overall, a very successful, beautiful, wonderful piece, well done.
    best wishes as always
    xElectricEyezx


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    December 7, 2005
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    I can't believe this suseann. You didn't tell me we had written one with the same title just a few days apart. Grief...I guess I missed this one when I was on my vacation from poetry lol. This is beautiful. I didn't mean to steal your title though! You should've said something Anyway, again this is so pretty. I hate I missed it.

    ~Lyrical


  • Dreamweaver silver member
    November 26, 2005
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    EXCELLENT

    A beautifully written poem well worthy of its placing. My hearty congratulations. I am sorry I have not commented earlier but my PC had crashed and I just recently back online.
    Once again, congratulations.
    Take care,
    Sammy

  • Rowan gold member
    November 23, 2005
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    A very stunning write, very beautiful!

  • wishintreeUK
    November 23, 2005
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    Well Done Suseann, a truly beautiful poem.

    ~Katie~


  • wishintreeUK
    November 21, 2005
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    Susann, this is breathtakingly beautiful, your rhyming is ACE, you have an excellent command of flow and your imagery is truly amazing.

    Well done and best wishes for the contest.

    ~Katie~


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 17, 2005
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    As one of my favorites, you have not let me down with this beautiful poem. Well done, my friend!


  • Taranand
    November 16, 2005
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    I feel excited that I have just discovered your work. Your obviously a very prolific poet. I'm looking forward to reading more.
    This was a lovely, gentle soothing inspirational write. Tara


  • Watuwant silver member
    November 16, 2005
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    Another soothing piece. I have not delved much into nature writes, sticking to the realms of my mind, but I rather like this one, which may inspire me to attempt some.
    I love the picture too, as it fits the poem perfectly.
    peace
    doug

  • wishintreeUK
    November 16, 2005
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    Thank you for entering my contest. ~Katie~


  • Sherry gold member
    November 15, 2005
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    Refreshing and beautifully done as though
    your singing from your heart in poetry to us.
    Never stop the songs from within you. ♥
    Edited on Nov 15, 11:48 p.m. because ''.

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