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Dreams

When I lay down and
Go to sleep at night,
I get to dream of
All the things that were
And never will be again.

The feel of your touch,
Your lips pressed against mine.
The warmth of holding you, and
The sound of your beautiful voice.

To look into your eyes
Once more and see endless possibilities.
It is all a dream now,
Just a dream that I
Look forward to each and every night.

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Dream a little dream tonight
Written November 15th, 2005

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  • Playful Angel
    December 1, 2005
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    this a really well written poem. i enjoyed reading this, i think it had a good content, although it was a sad one. i am sorry you are going through this pain, and i hope that the pain soon subsides, although im sure it will never really fade. all the best to you. keep up the good work. until next time, take care.

  • suicidal temptation
    November 15, 2005
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    OMG! Jeff, i think this is one of your bestest poems yet! I am soooo proud of you..even though it's about ur ex..it is incredible. I love the words u used to describe it, and her...very unique..nice write good job♥