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Anyway..

Don't look at me
You think I'm ugly anyway

Don't bother
You think I'm worthless anyway

Don't talk to me
You hate me anyway

Don't try to feel for me
You wish i would die anyway

Don't stand near me
You're sick of me anyway

Don't cry for me
You knew it was coming

Don't worry yourself
You're glad i killed myself

Don't think it was your fault
You know it was and you were glad

I wish I never met you
I wish I never laid eyes on you
I wish you never stole my heart
I wish you would kill me
I wish I would kill myself
I wish I could turn as invisible as i feel

When I'm around you,
I die inside
Each time
And i wish
It would come true
Don't be concerned with me
Our wishes were the same anyway

Author notes

i didnt want this to make much sence...and it seems i did a good job at it. anyway.....it was in my head and i had to get it out.
Written November 15th, 2005

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    very sad write but I'm glad you got it out of your system


  • GypsyEyes
    February 23, 2008

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    wow this has so much emotion in it! your poem is very overwhelming i like that! thank you for entering and good luck!
    NineTailedFox


  • xorandomxo
    February 13, 2008

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    wow this is a very good poem.
    it was really emotional.
    i love how you did the anyways at the end.
    thank you for entering.
    good luck.

    unbreakable♥


  • alandriel1138
    November 16, 2005
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    well thank you!! i didnt really much care for this poem..


  • spot the pink
    November 16, 2005
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    oh my god!!!!this is really very powerful....i like how its quite disjointed but not...
    groovy stuff!!


  • Rock-Junkie
    November 16, 2005
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    this is good. you did a good job brittany. im about to go write one now... we have a visitor in 2nd... its her brother-in-law. chyeah... see ya laterz byeseez love ya MUAH!!!
    BC

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