I trusted you,when no one could
now I wish I didn't
you should have not told
told what I was doing
to everyone.....
why girl
I loved you
and now I don't know what to do
I trusted you
this is how you repay me
oh now I see
you lied to me
about everything
told people what they didn't need to hear
so now you have something to fear
I don't trust you anymore
and that's that
so don't try to cry your way back
cause you are nothing you jack a**
I trusted you when no one could
now I wish I didn't
why you make it difficult
I told you some sercrets
that one knew
but only a few
I loved you
now I don't know what to do!
Oh yeah I do we are through!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Emily
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Written November 15th, 2005
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yea i know thanxz alot for ur comment! lol well ttyl
~Emily -
Yes friends can hurt,but that's life and we have to deal with it.We have feelings and one of those are to help you get over what's hurting you.Great write
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LOVED IT
this is so sad and depressing but really great ... NICE/WOnderful job on telling this girl that it's over...well ttyl I'll read some more...L8erz -
I am sorry this happened to you,it hurts when someone treats you like this.
Losing trust is something that is hard to replace. I wish you all the best
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sometimes things like this happen to show you the truth about people.i am sorry that this heppened to you, but what dose not kill you only makes you stronger. everything happens for a reason, and you will soon found why. so don't be but to mad at that person. I understand that it was just between you and her/him, but there must have been a reason for them telling people. There is most of time. Great job on the poem. Keep it up, and don't lose what gives you that egde......clara.........your sister........
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thanxz my homiedogg!
~Emily -
ok kelly sure! yea r we friends yet NO!! ok so stop sayin what i will do ur jus like it too! (llol) im being mean im jus sayin! u r like it too!
~Emily -
That's bad when the things not turn like we thought. "trust" someone told me we shouldn't trust anyone in 100% , i dont know but i never trust someone in 100% maybe for protect my heart? I dont know but it helps! Good piece , I can really related how you feelings on the piece , fine flowed , very nice done, keep up the great job! keep ur hand on pen!
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Deep emotions.....*hug*
Goodmorning my dear child,
I can feel your pain again as I read each line, each word in this poem. When you trust somebody, you become vulnerable, an easy target and therefore cling to a belief that that particular person will hold true to her or his own word as what your honest heart felt.
Sometines people, act out of control. They lost grasp of their own behaviour. They will not think before they will act and perhaps not even considering what will be the consequences of their own actions. It is so sad, and indeed pathetic. Impulsive reactions which led to destructions and everyone should stop, think, and go on meditations if needed in order to make proper decisions in life. For conflicts can arise any minute by not thinking thoroughly and will result in hurting others. We should avoid hurting other people's feelings, it is not good and it will just bring bad karma. There are those that are so bored as well, and to find amusement of their time, they will start tounge wagging and the first thing that will pop in their heads is mouthing off. They don't have self restraint and discernment.
My dearest Emily, please do this for us, for everyone that loves you;
keep your head above the water during the flood, then you will have the opportunities available, even in difficult and painful circumstances
Good courage will strengthen your heart......
Luv much,
Gem
P.S. I will be away from AP after I declared the winners of the kitty contest, don't know when I will be back....
Please don't be sad, and hoping to read all your positive poems and happy ones...I will just be around the corner, finding some peace with nature and serenity in my soul....
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ok well if that isnt a good poem to her i have a major question what happens when you and her become friends again and then you still have this poem ?? i bet you and her will be friends tomorrow !!! or sometime soon moreless oh well ttyl lylas
heavenjeff!! kelly -
I know what u mean as far as not trusting someone b/c they betrayed you ive had it done so many times and so now i wont trust anyone but good write good emotion!
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Trust,
Is something that is earned and not freely given away. When the trust between two people has been broken, you have to deside is it worth getting back. was it a simple mistake? or did they abuse your trust...
If you want to try to repair the damage that was done, sit and talk. If it is too painful you have 2 options, wait until your ready or 2 just walk away and continue down your new path without this friend.
Friends sometimes make mistakes as no one is perfect, try finding out why she abused your trust? then figure out what you would like to do.
Either way you go... I am here for you...
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true feelings never lie!!
I am so very sorry for this,,sometimes it takes something like this to show you the truth about people. It's a shame, but grow from this and never stop looking for someone who is worthly of your friendship. love you my baby.. -
oh... this is sad.... my darling..... I hate it when something like this happens. it really sucks. I'm here for you though, if you want to talk about it.
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