I tried to speak to you today,
But you just pushed me off,
Telling me you were with your boyfriend,
Yea your apparent prince charming.
I let you do this to yourself,
I let him hurt you,
I let him yell and rape you,
But you only told me its your fault.
I even hate myself for losing you,
I hate myself for not showing you how much I loved you,
I wish I could have told you how much I cared,
How much you mean to me,
To show you that I would treat you better,
Treat you like you should be treated,
Tell you that the world is corrupt,
And I will protect you.
I used to remember telling you how beautiful you are,
Telling you that what your family said isn't true,
Telling you my pain and how I got through it.
I guess I'll leave you my lost love,
I'll let the pain go on because I'm not there,
I'll let you live in your hell,
But I'll watch you,
Waiting and wondering if you'll see how much I love you,
How much I protected you and was there for you,
Hoping for one day you'll come back,
And then I can show you that you were better off with me,
That I am your guardian angel that never abandoned you.
Author notes
Written November 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- Darkened and frozen hearts by CianLOVES.
300 points, ended November 29, 2005, 7 entries
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Wow I really like this poem but I would like it if you would put the option number in your author comments seeing as it's in the rules, it makes it easier for me
I really like the lines "To show you that I would treat you better,
Treat you like you should be treated,
Tell you that the world is corrupt,
And I will protect you." This poem had a really good flow. I really liked the way you ended it. x-Chii-x -
aww wow i love the emotion in this piece.. the first half of this piece reminds of my best friend.. tho r relationship was platonic of course... she used to tell me many of the same things when i was in a bad relationship. i think u r a amzing person for being there for her.. and an amazing writer for expressing ur emotions so wonderfully. great work and good luck!
Yours,
FlavoredPoison
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