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The Death Of Lovely

Dying Slowly
Those Tired Eyes
Beauty Of Happiness
Now Slowly Dies

Begging Today To Be The Day
Where The Tainted
Memories
Will Fade Away

In That Blank Corner
If You Looked Hard You'd See
A Heart Beat Slowly Fading
A Life That Used To Be

Wrinkled Skin Of Lovely
The Pain Comes Aching In
The Clouded Eyes Now Blurry
The Bones Now Wearing Thin

Laugh Lines Turn To Wrinkles
As The Laughter Fades
Lovely Is Dying
Forever To Fade Away

Lifetime Gone Forever
An Awfully Long Time
An Hour Is An Hour
But Forever Is Till The End Of Time

The Heart Now Stops Beating
The Eyes Now Forever Cold
Lovely Ceases Breathing
A Tragedy To Behold....

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Written November 15th, 2005

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  • leander Moderators member
    November 22, 2005
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    What a sad and dark poem this is tears almost came upon my eyes while I ended reading this one! well done!

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  • BreakingxThexHabit
    November 15, 2005
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    this is a very sad poem full of emotions... great job!