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Love in All Season

On clear snowy night, you are mittens
Protecting me from cold
In the heat of summer, Your smile
Throws away the old.

In birthing spring or autumns death,
Your love breathes of no regret.
Soul surrender, in your debt
My life in all reason.
My love in all season.

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Written November 15th, 2005

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  • morgan1127
    June 29, 2006
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    I like how you go throught the seasons to express the love. i like this alot even though it is very short.

  • Tecohe
    February 11, 2006
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    Would that more of us had what you have here. I love "birthing spring or autumn death".
    In reading some of your other writing I love your independent stand and the celebration of your indiviuality.
    Tecohe


  • Faeleigh
    November 16, 2005
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    YAY! This was short yet deep and I love how you use the seasons. This is very unique and I enjoyed it very much. Great write!! Keep writing and have an uber shiny day!