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Two Stars Collided At Dawn

Growing darkness creeps along your body,
Your love; my heart, my life; your soul,
All one, ready to fuse forever,
We lay in this enternal splender.

A treaty bound, written in the sky,
Our love it too holds no bounds,
Your face, two streams of tears,
My voice uttering my one true fear.

Our bodies entangle; collide,
Your breath in silence you hide,
Our whispers turn to nothing,
Together as one; we feel everything.

Slip the poison into my life,
Let me feel your lips, your sife,
Hold you close before my hands fall away,
Leave this world in our arms forever we'll stay.

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Written November 15th, 2005

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  • November 15, 2005
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    superb!!

    seems you KNOW all about the connection of Twin Souls..YAY!!! Splendid work..love it!!


  • tattoomysoul
    November 15, 2005
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    its beautiful..


  • Uncle Haku
    November 15, 2005
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    What is this about? I'm assuming it's not personal experience, but it seems so vivid!