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Todo Necesito Es Tu Amor

Peace wraps around me,
Gives me solace from the storm,
Chases the chill from within,
Keeps me safe and warm.
I find such strength I never knew
And joy in my heart,
Sadness has no rightful place,
I don't feel torn apart.
I know all I'll ever need,...
It's you and nothing more,
My life in love shall be completed...
Todo necesito es tu amor.

-Keri
11-14-05

Author notes

Something I said last night...Inspiration comes from the greatest places.  Todo necesito es tu amor - "All I need is your love."

And the comment I received from my sweetheart...
Esto es tan hermoso mi amor!
Te quiero con todo mi corazón y alma.
Mi amor siempre será para ti.
Siempre.

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Written November 14th, 2005

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  • JustBe gold member
    April 5, 2006
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    Eh, your title is grammatically incorrecct. "Solo necesito tu amor," which translates to, "I need your love only," will work. Alternatively, "Todo lo que necesito es tu amor," which means "All that which I need is your love." Necesitarse is a reflexive verb.


  • ceXee
    November 19, 2005
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    awww thats so beautiful~!!!!! i love it


  • Summer Kiss
    November 16, 2005
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    I really like it! Its sweet and simple and flowed very well!
    And his comment was so cute too!! Great job hun and keep it up!!!

    ~paula~


  • Springheel
    November 16, 2005
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    Sweet little love poem. A bit dull, but I'm sure it isn't dull for you.

  • Springheel
    November 16, 2005
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    ?Tu eres un mono babaso, si?

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