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Armor

Protected my an armour of indifference,
Trying to hide behind it's solid worth;
Hoping that the shafts driven in my direction,
Will only bruise and not scar.

Praying that on some day,
I'll be able to shed this false protection,
Face whatever the world throws at me,
With the courage and confidence I lack.

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Written November 15th, 2005

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  • adorable yeti
    December 1, 2005
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    eerr.. trauma.. .. no I think not.. but my best freind is acting all wierd.. so yeah.. I just had to vent out...

  • Satin Raven
    December 1, 2005
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    This is sad, Chithu... are you undergoing trauma in your life? Good write though, well-written and abstract as poems should be. Change my to by in the first line.

    --Arthi

  • p
    November 20, 2005
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    Hey what is going on?You friends are dumb..ok?Don't even bother their fights..I am telling you they will make up..Now if tht is the reason you are feeling all weird then you are the weird brain..Anyway nice write!


  • Poet Raja
    November 16, 2005
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    Nice!!!

    A good introspective poem, Chithu, but I think you don't lack anything. On the contrary you need to find your innerself which holds the strengths you need and is at the moment unexplored by you.

    Courage and confidence comes from experience and maturity. So you will gain them soon enough.

    Nice write and good luck in your exploration into your inner self.

    Love and Blessings from Coimbatore - Uncle Joel -