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A Wisp of a Girl

A comely lass lithesome and lively
Left loathsome life at home.
"Prithee, Dear Abbess," blithely
She said, "I wish to no longer roam."

"May I stay here with you?
A fearsome father I forsake,
A drunkard that I rue.
'Ne'er your dowry shall you take!'

"Said he, as me he cast away.
Without a fortune, I enter the fray.
I left my goblet and my lute,
My damask, velvet, and my flute.

"Now on you I must depend,
As I am all alone.
Mother taught me how to mend,
And steel knives how to hone.

"If you can spare a morsel,
These things I'll do for you.
My cloak, my only parcel,
My board from you I sue."

The ancient nun did not say nay,
But led her to the table.
"Eat hearty now, and you may stay;
I sense your skills no fable."

The grateful girl did eat and sleep,
Her new home was the convent.
The clothes she hemmed became a heap,
And in her heart she was content.

In cool woods she walked each day.
Softly on moss a nut did fall.
She knelt beneath an oak to pray,
Thanked God and blessed them all.

A se'ennight passed,
And peace did reign.
She felt at home at last
Here in this calm domain.

A handsome youth astride a steed.
One day on her walk she spied.
"You've alabaster skin indeed --
A Phantasm you are!" he loudly cried.

"Come join me on my quest," he said.
"You may carry my longbow and feed my hounds.
You can sit on my pillion and lie on my bed,
You can soothe my brow when I finish my rounds."

She blushed and said, "I have no treasure,
But your idea I won't oppose.
I find you wondrous and to my pleasure;
Your labyrinthine logic, to be fine prose!"

"Your glamour and beauty outshine my hawk;
You pillage my life and shatter my heart.
You struck my orb, e'er we did talk.
Pray, don't misuse my liege, Sweetheart."

With trepidation she said, "You're no knave;
Were you my falcon, I'd loose your jesses.
But if you're faithful, I'll be your slave.
Love me well and loose my tresses.

"Together let's weave a life in love.
Through tribulation we will grow.
May God be with us from above
And bless our lives down here below."

Linda Elkins
(c) July 28, 2005

Author notes

My wife wrote this. - Ellis
Written July 28th, 2005

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  • kvwriter silver member
    January 25, 2008
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    So beautiful, loving and heartwarming. I entered this poetic story and felt her calm content, her peace even. As I wove my way through the poem, I couldn't help thinking of Grant and how this reminded me so of him. And, how much I miss him. Thank you for sharing such a delightful and deep part of your own love and union. Just beautiful! Be blessed!--Kel :

  • Gods Precious
    November 22, 2007

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    This was fun to read - enjoyed it allot, its more like a story than a poem to me. I enjoy reading your work.

  • Ir.muse
    November 26, 2005
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    A good story I should say. Wish you luck. Shahrzad

  • starlessnights
    November 25, 2005
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    What a fantastic poem! Almost like a story.. so detailed and well written. Wow.


  • Rainydaywoman
    November 15, 2005
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    Unique and Inspiring

    Wow. That is so cool. I read it out loud to myself, and found the first stanza or two tongue twisters! LOL! I thought this was such a treat from the typical poems I have been seeing so much of on AP. Ellis, your wife is a genius! And Linda, I hope you put more of your poems out here for me to read! Much love to you and yours, Harper

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