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Ehcilc os mi.

Stunned.

To silence

My heart flees the scene,
The gun still smoking,
The flesh still burning from the blast

Dead.

To the world

I ask but a favor:
Let me love and let me be happy,
Let me live and let me have a family,
Let me die peacefully

Broken.

In half

Of the days I sit here sick,
Home seems a year away,
Freedom miles and miles gone

Stabbed.

In the back

Of my mind I’ll always know
That he’s a demon in fluffy attire,
But still see white wings and a halo

Blood.

Sweat and tears

Make up my face like beauticians,
Set me free from tensions and nightmares
And help me finally move forward.

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Written November 14th, 2005

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