Feeling the hot tears run down my chilled cheeks is a relief. A heavy burden being lifted. I had been wishing those tears would come the whole way over here, to the vacant warmth of my mother's home. I do not have a shoulder to rest on or arms to wrap around me when I am suffering. I do not have a friend that I can trust. I know I should be thank full for what I have but how can I when I feel this void?
Author notes
I know this is short but like most of my stuff it is very personal. i was at a low when I wrote this. please comment on my works and how i can improve because i listen.
Written November 14th, 2005
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I loved it. Its really powerful and it kinda...stirred something in me or something. I think you did a great job and need to keep writing. Now, off to read more of your poems.
Cheshire Cat -
When your feeling all alone, there is a friend you can trust and will always be there, He is Jesus Christ. He will be there for you no matter what
even in your darkest hour.
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