I loved my artist
Painting his ideals upon
my baron body
Waiting to be the ultimate canvas
Portrayed in such an illustrious light
Each crevice leads to
Another stroke of the brush
Splatters of sketches
And heart shaped eyes
The body paint is flavoured
My artist, his true genius shines
through madness
I loved my artist
Especially his choice of canvas
Running his hands softly warming
The drawing board
Imagining what he could create
I loved my artist
His true genius shines
Through madness
Mad with love and lust
And I was his creation
Author notes
my FORMER bf is an amazing artist. he's won awards. we
broke up. but it's alright, it's for the best, besides- I have another one now heh
Written November 14th, 2005
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Interestingly written, i enjoyed reading it,
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very nicely written
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sexy awesome
hmmm sounds like a lucky guy to have such a hot goth/ punk like yourself. Sorry if i've been a pest! hehe. I'm glad I'm your friend at the least.
congrats and well written!
and the following was just phenomenal:
Running his hands softly warming
The drawing board
cuz it's not the actual drawing board he's touching. I totally get your metaphor! you're the board! hehe...how sensual and toned appropriately. -
LOL I see. That's always nice, to be in a positive light, in someone's eyes. I think you bring that across strongly, that you are his 'muse'. Or at least, that's the impression that you leave. That, and that you motivate him on, in his 'madness'. Such as it were. But then again, is there really such a thing, as a sane artist. You show me one, and I'll show you a 'crafter'.
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wonderful
More than anything...is the fact that there is someone in your life that can make you his canvas. That the canvas he chooses to paint his creations upon allows and ignites his imagination. That you in turn are able to use the artist as your canvas and create an equally astounding work of art. Such feelings, are difficult to articulate. To bring out every nuance that makes it that much more beautiful. You have done an extrodinary job here. I don't know that I would be able to articulate and make one feel such overwhelming love and affection.
~Michelle~
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a masterpiece, a work of art to say the least. lol. i think this is a great poem. in my mind i could see a person creating another in like a work shop. i am sure they will put you in a muesum. an way to go with your friend. that is a honored to be rewarded for your hard work.
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that's awesome! thanks so much for your kind words. I will return the favour two fold!
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Amazing how you portrayed this I loved your poem You are talented and a creative write Great job.Its nice to have inspiration and my boyfriend has inspired me and how i write
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