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Goodbye...

cut my wrists no more
no more blood
or tears
only my fears
are left
looking through the darkness
into the light
but no one is in sight
no one can see
me change
change into the person I want to be

cut my wrists no more
so finally I can see
and finally be here with you

Goodbye to all my tears
and fears
Goodbye to all the blood that has been spread out beyond me

Goodbye to all my pain
so now I can be sane

~Emily~

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Written November 14th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • So-Alone
    November 29, 2005
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    thanxz!


  • DreamingMoon
    November 29, 2005
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    judged excellent- Great job


  • misunderstood chick
    November 25, 2005
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    This is really good. I wish i was like that. I'm a cutter. I wish i could say goodbye to the pain and blood, but it's not that easy for me. Well, anyway good write.
    ~m.c.


  • ashes of freak
    November 18, 2005
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    LOVED IT

    this was good...really great way to say goodbye..well my name is Emily too but I like to be called Ash...well anywho ya um really loved the poem...what place did you get in the contest? I was in the same contest but didn't get anything...well ttyl Emily aka Ash


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    November 15, 2005
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    Goodbye, Something I never thought I would be happy to hear. YOU have started a new path my sweet.

    Many things may happen throughout your life, some good others not so good, but you have the strength to accomplish anything you set your mind too. YOU are a very beautiful and smart person. If you stumble on your new path do not worry we all do. If you need to talk.. I am here... Always to lend you a hand, you never gave up on yourself adn I will never give up on you.

    I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for saying Good Bye


  • November 15, 2005
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    much better my darling,,grow and learn from these things and remmeber who you are....I love you!

  • lostsoul788
    November 14, 2005
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    good to hear that u are better and loving life

  • rabidgnomes
    November 14, 2005
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    did it come from your meeting today?

  • rabidgnomes
    November 14, 2005
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    interesting poem...


  • November 14, 2005
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    A wonderful poem from a very wonderful girl!

    I am so happy my dear child! This really is a treat and thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for this wonderful poem of yours! I love it a lot, more than what word can say!
    I will always be here for you, and that I promise!

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