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Something Personal (Acrostic)

Something Personal.
Oddly called to
Mind layers of
Effervescent images.
Tinkering with self
Hindered memories.
Illuminating illusions
Notorious for twisting
Gears of recollection.

Perhaps, in perpetual
Engagement of mattering mind,
Rests sanity.
Solitude in the song
Of silence
Nested comfortably
Around the
Language pool.

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Written November 14th, 2005

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  • sullivanthepoet
    July 25, 2007

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    Clever...

    I know how tough this is... I penned a piece I called alphabet of lust that ran the alphabet the same way (leter retitled 'Forbidden Fruit' because nobody who read it noticed) and this is an exceptional example of this genre. It is SO difficult to funtion poetically in shackles and you managed it without clanking the chains one... Nice one... Mike


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    November 14, 2005
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    Lol, it is simply a musing of personal thoughts. The inspiration was just the contest title and the directions my mind went in trying to connect to the topic. Thanks for trying to understand. I am not sure that this piece will be understood by anyone, but the author

  • heart on sleeve
    November 14, 2005
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    ok first time ever but i don't get this poems meaning, and i apoligize for that, i cannot say it is bad as the words you have used are so together in a factual type way, but i don't understand it!! sorry lol abigailxx