The tenderness of your touch
Melts the ice around my heart
The warmth of your eyes
Ignites the flames within my soul
The kindness of your voice
Builds tears in my eyes
The purity of your kiss
Chisels away at my protective walls
The truth of your words
Ring through my ears
The love of your heart
Renews my faith once again
The romance of your soul
Rekindles all my longing desires
All that you posses
Instills hope in the very core of me
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Written November 14th, 2005
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My dear friend, this is just awesomely beautiful! The love you feel for this man just oozes out of every line! Thank you for sharing and thanks for entering my contest! Your entry is one of the reasons why this will be difficult to judge! Bring it on!
Sandy
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...and now I remain captivated in a world penned by another.
I must epress much admiration for your ability write so elloquently.
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Brilliant!!
Awesome! The sheer magic of love is expressed so eloquently
in this romantic masterpiece. Love is everything. We all search for that eternal passion and affection hoping to find
it in someone special that will be true to us and us only for
a life time. How sweet and earness were your words of love.
It was like the rising of the sun off the ocean's horizon after
a tempestuous storm. May the light of love lift thrill and embrace you now and forever!
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Awesome job. I really like this poem. I recently found someone that makes me feel this way. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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BTW thanks for the inspiration sweetie
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awww...how romantic. I would melt in my shoes if someone wrote something like this for me. Great Job!
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Heartfelt Beauty
awww, very lovely dear bel...the renewed vigor of love is usually awe inspiring and you did a wonderful job in capturing the resurrection of love in one. excellent job.
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