Why can't our dreams come true?
And why did I fall in love with you?
Do you love me too?
Am I some thing special to you?
Am I some one you can trust?
Can I have trust in you?
Will you pick me back up when I fall?
Will you give me strength when I give up all?
Will you lend me you shoulder to cry on?
Will you hold me close to you when I shiver?
Will you be my knight in silver?
Will you be there?
Author notes
Written November 14th, 2005
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I could feel the confusion that was being felt while you wrote this poem. The only thing that killed this poem is the fact that some of the lines rhymed while others do not. When most of the lines rhyme you should go ahead and keep up the rhyming scheme.
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NICE WORK!!
WEll... the only answer from a 'knight' you will always get is: "Yes of course! YOu can trust me." So there is no need to ask this question in real life... It is going to be useless I suppose... I loved the poem. So emotional... Uh!
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