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Life is Funny

I say this because all through your life
you live in a fog and for some people it
just seems like on day they wake up and the
fog is gone and they see the world for what
it really and truly is harsh and rough and
not like it was when the were in the fog
and now they wish they were back in the fog
that let the world seem like such a save
place but the reality is that its not but
some people for some reason just haven't
awoken or don't want to from the fog.

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Written November 14th, 2005

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  • WhyShouldntIBeMe
    November 16, 2005
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    no I wrote this before I started my question style lol I wrote most of these a year ago


  • TheMoodchangingPoet
    November 14, 2005
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    WHAT??

    WHY??? Why didn't you ask anything????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Where are all the question marks?? The poem was good but... Are you dumbing your style???