Do you even see me anymore?
If I were to die,
Would you even cry?
If I were to fall,
Would you be there at all?
If I were to fly,
Would you see me pass by?
If I were to stumble,
Would you get me out of trouble?
If I were to lose my way,
Would you find me some day?
Or do you even see that I'm gone?
Author notes
Written November 14th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love and Pain by mrmann1819.
350 points, ended November 16, 2005, 18 entries
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Nicely done. Good flow. Looking forward to reading you other stuff!!
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YEAH!!
Well... That was a nicely rhymed one! I liked it. By the way... you must be very fast at typing... A poem after a poem, a question after a question... and they all are coming soooooooooo fast! I promis I will comment on all of them!!! Hahahahahahahaha
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