Welcom to my nightmares
Wlecome to my dreams
Everything is real here
Just as it seems
Have a look, if you will
You don't have to pay
Everything is free of charge
You just have to stay
Welcom to my nightmares
Wlecome to my dreams
Everything is real here
Just as it seems
Now you know whats going on
Deep inside my head
Now you know whats going on
Oops now your dead
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Written November 14th, 2005
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Wowz.
That's good. I like the ending. Oops now you're dead. -
wow, i like that, it is so short but you can imagine so much with those words....lol ok, im wierd.... great write.
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you spelled welcome wrong in the first 2 lines. and in the 3 stanza as well. I liked the use of a repetitive stanza it was fun and set up a rhythm. and this poem was pretty good, I likded it. good work.
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Wow! I loved this. It was so awesome!! I hope you write more. You are so talented darling!
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sweet
hmm...your dark and cynical aren't you love.
-blackbirdhunter xoxo -
no probs
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fantasic
i am impressed fantastic poem -
Hey this is an awesome lyrics. And i hope that you write some more awesome lyrics like that this was the best i ever read. I think words can't describe what i feel. this is just amazing.
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sorry to say the frist thing that hits me is a typo! unless you meant welcom. I think you mean welcome for the frist line first word. If not, I would so like to know what a welcom is. you might want to fix that. Cause it is the first word you read and bam! hits you like a ton of bricks if it is a typo. sorry to say. Don't be mad! I see it is infront of 'to my nightmares' twice. so what is a welcom?
It is a very nice poem. kinda that creepy cool kinda thing. you got to love it for that.I am not a big fan of ryhmeing, but it works here. Very nicely done. Oh I am dead? cool! being dead is a funny thing. lol. like I said nicely done. -
nice.
I like it.
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Things are not as they appear
So great Steve!!!!! I really like it, I am rubbing off on you, just kidding. You know me. Ha Ha Ha. Very evil. So very good Steve, so you better have something to top this one off. -
Wonderful
Wow this is awesome. I love it! Great job babes.
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haha the ending made me laugh, but u need to spell check it
"Welcom to my nightmares
Wlecome to my dreams" see, on the whole pretty kool, interesting phsyco mind you got ther -
lol this flowed well
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Sweet
Nice poem hun. -
Nice work!!
Hehehehe... That was pretty funny at the end. I like it very much. Well done!! -
*psycho, hunny.
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wooooooooooot! man, i love when you write, ya need to do it more often though
great job, keep it up!
~Lea -
holly shit dori this was asome i would have never imagened an ending like this one did that was asome it was really good good job babe keep it up
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that's kool...i have some poems like that..welp you have fun
talk to ya later.
lexy -
yeah...another creepy song...spooky gothic music
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