cold is the air as the blade cuts through it
the skin is bare the artery exposed
her skin is fair her scent entrancing
the threat is there a princess her time is up
but he cant bare to see her blood flow
but his oath holds hime true, she must go
so a poison he procures it passes her lips
from her heavenly body her life slips
-sean m-
Author notes
this i wrote after reading, king of foxes by raymond e. feist check it out it is the sequel to tallon of the silver hawk, which rocked as well.
Written November 14th, 2005
A contest entry
- Your Best Three Pre-writes by piccola.
800 points, ended November 27, 2008, 140 entries
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I wonder if the poem is any easier to understand after having read the books? I hope not because I don't feel like running out to the store ... this is sad. thanks for the entry
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thank you for both of your comments.
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been awhile gonna have to get raymond e, feist back on my shelf..well done
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thank you very much
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you did well with this poem flowed good and made sense, formed nicely over all thank you for sharing this lovely one with us..Linda
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