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Bleeding Proof

I can't seem to fight these tears
I'm held back by forsaken years
Reminiscing on my darkest fears

I bleed these arms just for you
Proof of all what we went through

Scars speak words that were left behind
Fallen hopes of love unkind
But still you live on in heart and mind

Pains to deep they eternally bleed
You should have payed me some fucking heed

Strong currents of undeniable destruction
Let go of gods condemning instruction
This is my hearts morbid construction

Crimson dowsing my heartbreaking flame
Put myself through this once again

I can't seem to make a decision
Where exactly can I make the incision
Blurry eyes condole my vision

Trapped within two thoughts of love
Fall to hell or rise above

I fall before you blood on my arms
How much more can I self harm
As I plea and try to remain calm

I sacrifice my tarnished self to you
Remember my blood, proof of what we went through

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Written November 14th, 2005

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  • Avalanche.Echo
    November 24, 2007
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    This is really good, and I relate more than I wish I did. Good luck!

  • pelirroja
    March 1, 2006
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    this is really good and the colors really add to it. i love the way it all fits together. good write.


  • MorningWinds
    November 14, 2005
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    wow such an awesome poem! I love it,your writing is amazing


  • Blazing White Wolf
    November 14, 2005
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    i have to agree it does feel/sound lyrical and I love the solid rhyme and the alternating 2 line 3 line verses you are trying different creative experimentation I am so proud of you Nikki very well done and expressed love you
    dad


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 14, 2005
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    Nice flow, and your words within brings powerful, vivid imagery to this almost seemingly lyrical poetry..Thanks for sharing, all the best in the contest...pen on!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver

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