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An eternity

Every living thing on this earth
shall tremble in their last hour of life,
except this lover
for if I have no fear
my courage is from the promise of
an eternity...
an eternity... of your love..
an eternity...  with your love..
an eternity... In Heaven

Author notes

this is for the most special person in my life.. he knws who he is...i tend to have prose plummet out my mouth every so often

Written November 14th, 2005

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  • bedazzled
    December 15, 2005
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    The only thing that annoyed me was the grammar and that's just because I'm an English freak. Other than that the emotion was all there!


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    December 9, 2005
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    good!

    Good. I think you should go over it with the spellcheck. Other than that it was good.

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ Sacred Shadows aka the Rocker who lost all


  • Trial and Error
    December 9, 2005
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    This is sweet. The first line though is way longer than all the others, which kinda messes up the appearance and read, but maybe that's cuz it's not even five in the morning o.o
    But overall, good write
    ~</3Kat

  • im a little pea
    November 14, 2005
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    hugs from your hostage...