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Time Will Tell

Spiraling on a downhill run against life's fate
How time has changed so many things

The choices we make tell our tale
Some take the hard road
Some the easy way out
Some just take the long way around
In the end we all face the same

Black, white, yellow, green
Today color is no matter
It's how you choose to live your life

Was once OK to start a family at an early age
Today, it's "babies having babies"

Women staying home raising their family
Bonding? No.....
Today, you're just lazy

A single mother having a child
Then you where shunned
Today, you're Strong

Relegion, then was forced upon youth
Today it's a choice

Once drugs where acceptable
Today, you're the devil
Simply a choice made out of weakness
The desire to be high
Take off into a world unknown
There's no one there to bring you down

Choices....

Every choice you make in life matters
No mater how big or small
It sets the stage for the next generation to grow
What is right today maybe wrong tomorrow
Only time will tell



















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Written November 14th, 2005

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  • cake
    February 1, 2006
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    i like the last line as it shows that in fact there is no absolute truth that things and people change with times.
    cake


  • Baby Princess
    November 20, 2005
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    Wow, excellent and many people can relate to it
    Thanks for sharing!
    *Baby Princess*

  • noneedforausername
    November 20, 2005
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    That's an excellent poem - totally speaks my mind! Great job, keep on writing! greetz, melo.


  • wellnow1313
    November 14, 2005
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    all fixed thanks!


  • purple elephant
    November 14, 2005
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    this was a great piece stirred up so many emotions in me as i relate to many things.

    'the choices we make tell our tell' is that supposed to be 'tell our tale?'

    i really enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing...check ya

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