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Gothic Revelation

Silver Water
Vision Turns Black And White
Murky Scum Colored Drunking Water
Where Every Disease Lurks Out Of Sight

Child Come Play In This Place
Assumptions Are Not Quite What They Seem
Dressed Up In Lots Of Gold And Lace
The Riches Are Only Determined By What Gleams

If Youre Beautiful, We Will Support Your Every Need
Later On You'll Eventually Meet
A Time They Ignore You When You Bleed
No More Kissing Your Beautiful Dainty Feet

A Painting Expresses Your Emotion
The One You Couldn't Quite Figure Out All These Years
The Life Thats Been Clouded By Tears
Tranfixed Once With Gold, But Now Transfixed With Fear

The Beautiful Scars Glow On Your Arm
As The Water Turns From Silver To Cold
They Will No Longer Keep You From Harm
They Will No Longer Give You Their Hand To Hold

It Took So Many Years To Find Out What You Feel
It Took Too Many Years
To Tell The Masquerades From The Life We Call Real
It Now Will Take A Century More To Heal

In The End You'll Agree That It Wasnt Fair
As The Waters Which You Danced In Now Are Still
The Beautiful Face Of Yours Now Seems Bare
In The End....Living To You Takes Up Too Much Will

Alone And Empty, Another Picure Of Emotion
An Elderly Lady Sitting In The Window Sill
Giving Another Girl Done Wrong,
That Emotion She Couldnt Quite Name
In The End That Girl Realizes...

Old Beauty Is That Of A Young Depression
Euphoria Of A Gothic Revelation....

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Written November 13th, 2005

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  • BreakingxThexHabit
    November 15, 2005
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    wow. u have a really great way with words. lots of emotion in this write. keep it up u have lots of talent....

    ~Darksoul216


  • tordway
    November 13, 2005
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    Excellent

    You have a talent. Continue to write, I enjoyed the read.


  • November 13, 2005
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    i thought it was amazing i realy cant exsplain it but i got so much emotions out of it......keep going u have an amazing gift...