each day
I wanna say
I believe
believe my family
when they say "I Love you"
but I just don't know what to do
each day
you say
I believe in you
but when you
say, I'm never there
I can't believe that
I'm always here
I never left
I just didn't believe
believe that there's good
in people
because I always saw the bad
oh how sad
but now I'm starting to believe
believe in you
believe in me
believe in us
I'm starting to believe
~Emily
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Written November 13th, 2005
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thanxz alot im hoping i have achieved somthin but im not sure
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This poem really touched me because you've achieved something I haven't yet. It's a very well-written piece and it deserves applause.
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Excellent, Poignant
Emily, not only is this poem very well-written and demonstrates a lot of talent, but it also conveys what many teens go through emotionally when they reach that age of struggling to spread their own wings to fly. Life isn't about pleasing all those around us, for in many cases this just won't happen. But, if we decide to please God, then we also please some of the people: not all of them, mind you, but some of them for sure. God says all things possible through Him; so, know that you can do anything once you set your mind to it.
Love and hugs
B♥nnieQ
Associate Editor, WA
Waltsan Publishing, TX
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thanxz my AP daddy i care and feel for u too lol!
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Thanxz my AP mom i love ya u that know that lol!! thanxz alot
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A poem full of hope and goodness!
It is important to try. Even if the task is difficult, don’t avoid it, just keep on trying and believing. Because if you do avoid trying and believing, you will lose the opportunity for a greater reward of success, joy and happiness. The love and the support of everyone around you and people who expressed their genuine care and love is worth trying the effort. You might not be able to do everything but at least you can do something.
I love this poem so much that you have written so well for it is full of hope and you have grown a lot! You have been wiser and stronger and that only shows the better you and to prove to the world that you can do it! Yes my dearest child, you can do it, you can make it!
Good work my dearest child, and I do hope to read some more positive ones like this, and this really makes me happy and it made me smile a lot! 
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What a beautiful poem dear Nicki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like this one. I hope everything works out for you.
Cara
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Your poem is filled with such hope. It is so good to hear, see, and feel. You are a very sweet person whom I care about. The key is not just believing in the people supporting you but believing in yourself. Everything else will come in time. I am very proud of you and for everything you have accomplished.
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