The images so vivid in my mind
seeing the harmful touches
making me forever blind
taking your precious time
torturing my innocent body
so young and unknowlegable of this crime
your just killing your own pain
trying to inflict it upon me
you did a good job, now they can deem me insane
peeling at my youthful skin
laughing as you continue
smirking at this unforgiven sin
Seeing theses memories in my dreams
crying silently so no one can hear
waking, shivering, cold from my screams
The impressionable sight
of you hurting me, over and over again
this is why I can't sleep at night
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Written November 13th, 2005
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Once again, thank you so much volst conundrum, it means a lot to me. I think Im going to go read some of your poetry... see if you have any new work. *smile* take care.
~Kiersten~ -
...good work again...u really know how to keep your pens scratching...great flow of thoughts and images,,,....evry write supercedes the other..ur really at the verge of extravaganza..
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Hey, thanks... and yea... i understand, i generally hate most people, so I understand. I hope your doing well, too. Take care hun. ~Kiersten~
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This si really great... really really great....really this is just unbelievable. And in my personal opinion... Humans are scum. And all people are allholes. I'm really loving eh? lol. Well I hope you are doing well, I too have trouble sleeping.
Sending you my love,
Cassandra. -
Well... i debated putting it under abuse, but i didnt. I probibly should have and im sorry if it brought back difficult and painful memories. I am glad that you liked it though. Just take care hun. ~Kiersten~
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wow, i like this alot. I can really realte. In a way, I'm glad yet updet by reading this poem. I havent really thought about anything like this in a while, and i've been happier and better not thinking about it. But, I never do forget. This is something so heartless and creul, that no one should be albe to realte, but many can. I really enjoyed reading this. You have a beautiful way of expressing your emotions, as well as mine. well keep this up.
Beautiful write
So Sorry
Allie -
Hey hun... thanks... now that i reread it... the first part... idk.. seems forced, but oh well I guess i can fix it. I know ur here for me and it means a lot to me. But im fine... for now. A latin convention? whats that?
OOO... and I sent the pics! ha... i finally got em to ya! took forever but i did... if it wont let you open em all up, then let me know and ill send the others seperatly. Yea... Dave didnt go... he was in school, he couldnt get the day off. But i dont recall jumping in the air?! lol i really want to see that one... I love fairies!! Well you might not have to send it... My mom and I will be up there probibly on the 17th of December... were driving up! And I dont blame you... that thing was probibly infested... lol... but it was worth it, It does look better with the two of us! Hehe. Srry... im all giddy and girlly, cause the guy I've had feelings for for a while finally made a move... hes supposed to call me tonight and he wasnt to "do something this weekend." just the way he asked me was so cute! okay... well I'll leave ya alone now! talk to you soon... Love you.
~Kiersten~ -
Hey you ... this is realy awesome. I'm sorry that your still not sleeping good at night. Is this about that thing that ou told me about one of the last times you were here. And remember if you ever need to talk you can still come to me. That good that shools going good. I know his ring is so shinney I LOVE IT!!! Yeah I'm starting to get a little better but it sucks bec I have a Latin convention to go to and I don't think that I'll be able to go if I'm sick. And yeah it is really cute watching Ginger and Pippin play. It's been 3 days and I don't have the pics yet
Oh and we got the pics back from Willamsburg and they look really good ... I didn't see any of David in them though. But theres one of you ... your standing infront of this building and there are golden leaves every where and your jumping in the air, it look really awesome and I swear you look like a fairy in it. If you croped in the pic so that you couldn't see the ground it really will look like your flying. But we got doubles so I'll try and send you them. Awe I'm sorry I just didn't want to be in there by myself and dosen't it look bettre with the two of us. Well I'll talk to you later. Love ya lots 
~Rachel~ -
Thank you!
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i like this poem its very dark and i can feel the pain just pour out of this poem keep up the good work
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