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A Friendster Testimonial for an Imaginary Childhood Love

Because I’m too fair
Not to recreate you
As a box full of positive
Adjectives
And tell you exactly
What I want to hear myself say,

I’ll just tell a story—
Maybe the story
Of how we first met:

I see missing front teeth smiles
And tucked shirts,
Cowlick hair.
I do not remember the first handshake
Or the first hair-tug.

Elementary school was just
Six years—
But you render death and forever 1 in me
As a lesson;

I keep hearing
The teacher’s stick rapping on the table
Abruptly

When I turned my head
And saw your two front teeth gone
And I laughed.

The teacher’s reprimand—
Quit looking behind your back.

And you know I was
never the teacher's pet.



1-line borrowed from e.e. cummings’ somewhere I have never traveled.

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Written November 13th, 2005

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  • ebaby
    November 14, 2005
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    super poem

    yes a wonderful refreashing poem, very decriptive and nice. I enjoyed reading this alot!


  • theprodigalsister
    November 13, 2005
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    So sweet!! I love it, it totally takes me back through the years. Wonderful job my dear