You're like raindrops from a blue sky.
.... [/Unusual yet Predictable]
.... [/Fragile but Unbreakable]
.... [/Bitter + Sweet]
.... [/Once in a life time]
You were ...
Strong enough to mend even .. Me
- Despise the downpours,
&Thunder
&Bitterness.
You were the only one, the only one - Who WANTED to save me.
You are ...
More than just my Angel
You are my saviour.
&My confidant
&My life.
- I'm "In love" with everything you mean to me,
& Everything that "forever" holds ...
But I'd give up that "forever" -
For Yoouu.
So shimmer -
Because I can't fall any further,
Than I have for you.
Author notes
Again, non-poetic & such. Just me ranting and trying to contain my happiness and excitement.
I love Yoouu ff.
<steve3
Written November 13th, 2005
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Oh my god that's beautiful. That almost made me cry...seriously.
That is wonderful. Thank you. I love the power of poetry, it evokes the emotion, it reminds us of our own emotions, of the emotions of others. Thank you for evoking something so beautiful in me.
Have a grand day.
Nick -
Ohhh, this is SO freakin sweet. I'm not usually the lovey dovey type, lol, but since getting back with my old boyfriend I can totaly relate to this. Fantastic job with this amazing piece.
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hey good stuff this....i did'nt know u were in love ...anyways this says it all ,its so open and fresh ,really nice...keep it going...love weila
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amazing
ah. Kalah.. you know you write so well. Your words are so beautiful and so heartfelt. I love this. Its really amazing. everything about it is just... right.
So shimmer -
Because I can't fall any further,
Than I have for you.
<<that is beautiful. last stazna just summed the whole poem up. and did it gracefully.
once again. great job LOVE YOU!!
<33MISS INXS -
hmmm, i thought i already commented on this one...guess not, i will fix that lol
this was a great piece of work, as you always manage to do somehow. lately my words seem to be all dried up...school is taking uo so much time...grrrr
anyways, this is supposed to be about you...i enjoyed this, as i do all of your work, i could definately identify with the emotions portrayed, keep it up!
tasha -
I thought you've written this for me!
but what I saw on your author comment this for steve , your man! 
ehehehe I was kidding , it was really cute piece with your style, non-poetic, but what? who cares on poetic or not? as I just love your creation on here 
It was cool and cute, I can related there was lots of love that you having for him! Hope everything goes so well for both of you! Short cute piece! Bravo! 
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Hey thanks Lauren,'
Sorry about never replying to your comments and ignoring/never chatting with you. Just the way things turned out I guess..
Thanks anyway.
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aww this is really cool kalahlalalala i like the first stanza. tis cool x x x
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Woah this is a cool poem! i like how you set it up on the page. that is something clever and unique that i haven't seen before. gives the poem a cool effect!
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