Beauty
inspires weeping
essence of Life unveils
mountains of hope, shoreline of love
your eyes
Author notes
Syllable count of a cinquain per line:
2
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www.allpoetry.com/poets/Nicolette
Written November 12th, 2005
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Perfect cinquain. I do so love this form and you've mastered it well. What lovely images it weaves. It is like the smell of spring.
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Too abstract
Not sure what "essence of Life" is. What are "mountains of Hope"? Not much to go on here. -
Thanks, Robin...she deserves all the grandest words we can think of...I'm glad ya liked it, Sweetie...
Wander
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Ohhhhhh, beautiful, simply beautiful Wanda. I agree so much too. There is so much depth to Nic. She inspires tears of in many shapes. She inspires me too Wanda. This is so sweet. I see that she loved it
But of course she would!
~Lyrical
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Sooo...ya liked it, then???
Ahhh, Nic...you deserve every single line, m'Lady...I'm pleased you liked it...& the honour is all mine, my Friend... Vlindertjie
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WOW...Vlindertjie - you just have the ability to leave me speechless, to make all my doves take flight! WOW, first I had to tear my eyes away from the picture...Mystic ~ South Africa - aaah even the picture tells a story. And then the cinquain...my dear soul sister, your pen weeps beauty in to my eyes... *Thank you so much for this beautiful poem that also reveals your inner beauty . Amazing..you are just amazing and I am so happy to call you friend . Thank you...
~ Nicolette
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