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Jester's Court

She was just a girl
Dressed in a woman's skin.
Never quite got it
Never quite fit in
Knew early on that throwing words
Was a waste of time
Prize possessions like sincerity
Never did headline

She always strolls the second path
To the drummer in her heart
To try to make a difference
In a worldly jester's court.

She's walked a lifetime
Following her heart
She's stood tall while she crumbled
And dreams blew apart
She held her head above the shame
Of a world gone quite insane
To face the empty mornings
She embraced the pain

She always strolls the second path
To the drummer in her heart
To try to make a difference
In a worldly jester's court

She never wanted the career
Of a liberated woman
She found freedom on a path of truth
Sought solace in the moment
Now she walks in solitude
Upright and on her own
People and possessions come and go
But thru it all she's known

To always stroll the second path
To the drummer in her heart
To try to make a difference
In a worldly jester's court.

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Just a song
Written November 12th, 2005

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  • LittleKnowItAll
    January 10, 2007

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    I'm glad you commented me or i'd probably have never had the pleasure of reading one of your beautifull poems
    This one grabbed me in with the first two lines, and it didn't fail to dissapoint,
    truly well done, i'll definately be sticking around if poems like this is what this site has to offer.

  • Di-Z-Killa
    June 2, 2006
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    The repition makes the poem get its point across. I bet it makes us all feel how bad it really is to never make it and be looked down upon. All in all gret poem.Great


  • malkinpuss
    February 8, 2006
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    Awqesome...I heard music!!!


  • J Rhys Davies
    November 13, 2005
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    I dig this. Usually, I try to make up something nice to say when I read lyrics that really aren’t all that great, but I have to tell you, that will not be the case this time. I thought that this was truly magnificent. I love the fact that all of your posts feel like you are basically telling your story, but using a different vehicle to do so. You are an amazing writer, and I enjoy reading your work immensely.

    ~ John


  • purplelirpa
    November 13, 2005
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    I really like this poem. It reminds me of my fear of change, and how I fight for everything to just stay the same.
    the lines:
    Now she walks in solitude
    Upright and on her own
    People and possessions come and go
    reinforce the strength that it would take to remain true to yourself in a world that is ever-changing throwing many different obstacles.

  • heart on sleeve
    November 12, 2005
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    this is fanbloodytastic and other than telling you the verse was grand and i adored the line
    she's stood tall while she crumbled
    and dreams blew apart
    she held her head above the shame
    and
    sought solace in the moment
    now she walks in solitude
    completly flawless and like i sais FANBLOODYTASTIC! lol abigailxxxxx

  • deleted all poems
    November 12, 2005
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    it's a very good song indeed. do you play instruments and sing or just sing? for I certainly hope you do so the world can hear your songs the way you wrote them. this is great.
    Eryn


  • Beret55 silver member
    November 12, 2005
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    That was very nice. Sad but nice. I liked it.

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