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Good Bye

When you spoke those words to me, you tore my world
apart
Quickly like a dagger they ripped right through my
heart
I have saw my life crumble, right in front of my eyes
Your arms are the only thing from which out of this
pit I can rise

Two words and my life as I know it was through
Inside I am numb and cannot live without you
Too grief stricken for any form of feeling
Your touch is the only thing, that to my heart will
bring healing

Since those words you said, there's no point to my
life
Other than you, for me, there is no Mr. right
And now you're gone, as your feelings for me have
changed
But for you my tears still fall, fall like cascades of
rain

I want you, need you, and beg for you to come back to
me please
If you were to cut my veins, love for you is all I
would bleed
my knees are weak, my insides churn as for your touch
i yearn
since you have been gone my love, my heart has wilted
like a fern

Simon you are my all, you are the only thing that I
desire
I would leave my life behind if there was a way to
rekindle the fire
I long for the day you caress my face and wipe the
teardrops from my eye
I would give anything and everything to hear you take
back the words "good-bye"

Author notes

Josh wrote this for me. Thanks josh. This is just what I wanted. Love ya!
Written November 12th, 2005

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  • poeticbandnerd
    November 12, 2005
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    she...i really like this poem, and i hope josh reads this too. Its really good and it shows everything that you are going thru, but i hope you know that i am always here, on the other end of the phone line, and as the song says..."i have some glue". so dont worry about "him", although i know it is going to be hard. please, just dont do anything...you know...stupid. he isnt worth it and you know that. josh and i are here for you 999,999,999,999,999% of the way. i think that gets my point across. i love you sooo much, and so does josh.
    see you on monday
    ~justin~


    *you smell like dead bunnies~

  • Joshua Buchanan
    November 12, 2005
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    Wow She, this is a really awesome poem! One of the best I have ever read! J/k I'm sorry and I really hope that simon reads this... I'm glad that I could help though, and as always if you need anything I am here for you!


  • Scandalous Beauty
    November 12, 2005
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    I love this poem,
    Guin