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In Paris (tanka)






Paris it is said
is the centre of fashion
even in the rain
my old rain-coat
is not shunned














Andrew Hide
12~11~2005

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Written November 12th, 2005

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  • anaisnais
    September 26, 2007
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    mmmm. I wish, I love Paris. You sum it up beautifully!


  • Dishy
    November 13, 2005
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    I liked this .Every thing old is new again


  • Emerald13
    November 12, 2005
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    a simple pivot line working seamlessly and gone global ... paris in the rain ... how nice .... although it is a planner who packs a raincoat when travelling ! ... maybe thats just an aussie's point of view (it rains more your way ?) ... many thoughts emanate from such a small piece >>> GINA

  • Dull Red
    November 12, 2005
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    very very lovely!! i like how you capture that amazing sense of 'fashionable' France and how you encorporate a really nice meaning in as well! rock on!