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Nothing for Anna?

 

 

 

Anna sent a letter to dear old Santa
not a selfish girl is she,
she asked him to relieve the world's suffering
and a prayer for mankind’s eternity.

 

No more war, heartache, pain,
children without fears, all at play.
Such a big heart should be rewarded,
nothing for Anna on Christmas day?

 

She has hunger beat, love and joy
throughout the world, all are wise.
Her pleas are answered, the world is fine.
(now I'll leave Anna one little surprise...)

 

(wrapped in love, warmth and kindness
and set with care under her Christmas tree
so on Christmas morning, in a world so fine
I can give back to Anna what she gave to me!
shhhhh!)







a response to Letter to Santa. by Zonia

 

 

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for Zonia
Written November 12th, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    November 15, 2005
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    thanks, simon, you had me go back and improve it a bit...!

  • simonitro
    November 15, 2005
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    A little tender to everyone's heart!

    This is pretty cute!


  • imonlyme7
    November 13, 2005
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    Ohh, this is so sweet!


  • wbiro gold member
    November 12, 2005
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    thanks, Jim, glad you enjoyed my little Christmas reply poem!


  • wbiro gold member
    November 12, 2005
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    thank you, mistic! glad you like my Christmas reply poem!


  • wbiro gold member
    November 12, 2005
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    thanks, tard (term of endearment! lol) glad you enjoyed my Christmas reply poem!

  • ecrivain01
    November 12, 2005
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    good job

    Excellent write. I love it.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 12, 2005
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    what a wonderful response to someone who cares so deep thank you for caring as you do Wayne you are just as special as the next..sweet one.. thank you for sharing..Linda


  • wbiro gold member
    November 12, 2005
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    You are welcome, Anna!


  • Anna Emkah
    November 12, 2005
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    My dear Wayne this is SO BEAUTIFUL. You have given me the most beautiful present ever... a poem and ..... shhhh! Thanks Wayne. I will never forget this Christmas present ever. THANKS! Anna.

  • retard
    November 12, 2005
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    beautiful poem, love the first line. made me feel naive again and gave childish brightness to my eyes. thank you.

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