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" SMILE" Please !



 smile please

smile makes the life beautiful,
expand your lips, it expand your happiness;
life is a puzzle, solve it by smiling;
smile makes the unknown an known,
smile can penetrate the china walls also..
language can separate us, but never smile.

wherever make a smile,
make the life beautiful..
a man without smile,
like the bud,
without blooming,
smile can open the
iron doors,
smile can make the
hell an heaven..

Make your world smile by your thoughts ,deeds
so..
smile please & Thank lord for given us the smiles
To share with all around us !

Author notes

"Smile, what's the use of crying "
You'll find that life is still worthwhile
If you just smile !

Written November 12th, 2005

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  • rosepoet
    November 20, 2005
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    amazing write my friend.This is thoughtful piece of verses and flows so well.yes i wish i could smile alot i sure will get by my way.This is great reminder.

  • Friends
    November 17, 2005
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    I love smiles and I love poems on smiles,
    This is so good and very cheery, I was smiling when I read this and even when I was commenting a smile was lurking around trying to make me grin and grin and then it was a big silly grin..(((grins))) (((smiles))) luv it


  • Abby100 Mann
    November 15, 2005
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    Laughter is the healing medicine and the key to self fulfillment and satisfaction in this life.
    The only way to break the walls of impossibilities of our
    world is to adopt a simple approach through smiles .
    This is a thoughtful piece of verses Subbu.Keep it up!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 12, 2005
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    It is really a great hopeful work of the positive heart and postive soul too. The thoughts are very true and very sacred with a flow of the purity of the mind and heart too. The sturcurte of the write helps us to design our life with the light of the beauty of the life through and through. The immaggery part of the write is very deeply expressing the strength of the subject very nicely. The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too.I really appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar

  • nellymichelle
    November 12, 2005
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    You are right...life is definitely worth living when we smile and we see others smile at us...atleast we know that we are worthy of others' smile....


    "language can separate us, but never smile"
    So true....when I went to a country where many people can't speak english,I smile and so do they and believe me its a very good feeling.

    SMile is a gift from God,I agree.....and we should never ever stop smiling.

    nellymichelle.

  • purefriendship
    November 12, 2005
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    Thanks a lot my dear The Rising Sun & Rennie for your comments.
    Let's bring more smiles in all APPoets too.


  • cherche -d -ame
    November 12, 2005
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    It never ceases to amaze me what a simple smile can d . I wish you the very best in this contest,
    Reenie


  • Raazi
    November 12, 2005
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    Ah! WHat a topic you have chosen here.
    A smile.....

    A smile can just change your mood. A single smile makes it sooooo heavenly....it has righly been said-
    A smile has a "mile" of happiness in it.

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