The taste of your lips,
the smell of you breath across mine.
Sensual touches, caresses, care.
Maybe it's the alcohol,
maybe the anticipation of our bodies.
Fumbled movements, swift lips.
Your fierce growls grow more intense,
your body shakes with each touch.
Sweaty, clammy, shaking hands.
Reasons for keeping this built inside,
reasons to explore each other.
Lust, passion, but mostly alcohol...
Author notes
I wanted to make a poem with my own stanza and pattern. I haven't written a lot of non-rhyming poems. It takes a long time for me to be inspired to write Erotic pieces.
I was going to call this Vodka, but I thought Alcohol Touches sounded better.
Written November 12th, 2005
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Very sensual and loving! I liked the descriptions! Meow!
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You're right. Alcohol Touches does sound better a title than Vodka. Good descriptions in this poem. Nice, sad touch at the end, "but mostly alcohol..."
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wow that was pretty cool, the last line has a little humor to it and i like how it just adds to it. good write
keep it up
Miranda -
lol i do like this poem, it can be very true at times, i do like the alcohol touches better then vodka but you could possibly think of vodka screams? meh.. erotica is sometimes hard to write great write
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