It lies behind the moonlight
in my dreamland far away
A land of sweet innocence
where your can play all day
Joys beyond your childhood
you have no responsibilities
time has no real meaning
in never never land you see
Boyhood thoughts prevail
dance lightly on the moon
pixie dust scattered about
moonbeams dance in tune
No rules made to be broken
you'll never grow up you see
wanting to be just like Peter
forever young and fancy free
A land without measured time
wandering from here to there
you will remain young at heart
wasting time without a care
Fly away to Never Neverland
where fairytales are foretold
there you will never grow up
your heart will never grow old
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neverland is my wonderland, i sniff pixisticks and mountain dew is awesome yo
I read "Thunder" by darkspiritonline.
Written November 11th, 2005
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memories of childhood when we had nothing to worry about. Long summers of play echo in our heads loved it -
Congratulations on your win. You clearly should have won the gold. The poem that won and the fact that someone would give it a gold trophy is kind of scary. Oh well...to each his own. Take care. Love, Linny
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ooooh, this was such a pretty poem! I really like the picture you put at the begining, it really adds to the image taht your poem gives
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
Thank you so much Marissa for the wonderful comment. I always love your beuatiful comments. They are so encouraging. Great contest. Take care, Sandy (Mom)
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This was a great piece.
I love reading about never never land.
Hence my AIM sn.. NEVERxNEVERxLAND.
I really liked the picture you put with it also.
Never land is one of my most favorite things.
I wish so often that I could visit there.
Great write.
keep it up.
Good Luck in my contest!
~Midnite Rae
[the morbid mistress]
aka:marissa rae
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